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[杂谈] 写作巧用"连接词"

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古惑、声恋月 发表于 2012-3-19 17:51 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
不少同学在写作时经常过多地使用and, but, so, then, yet等并列连词,这样做很容易使句子结构松散、乏味。但是,如果此时你能灵活地运用who, which, that, since, whenever, if , unless等从属连接词,你立马就可以妙笔生花,不信来看看。
例如:
    Natural resources are very limited. They will be exhausted in the near future. It is not true. But it becomes a major concern around the world. This is a widely accepted fact.
    [分析]这段文字由简单句组成,它们之间内在的逻辑关系含糊不清,意义支离破碎。如果使用连接词,将前后单句合并,形成主次关系,就能把一个比较复杂的内容和关系表达得比较清楚,而且还能使结构更加严谨。这段文字可以改写成:
    It is a widely accepted fact that there is a major concern around the world for the exhaustion of limited natural resources in the near future, though it is unlikely to be true.

再如:
    The Mississippi River is one of the longest rivers in the world, and in springtime it often overflows its banks, and the lives of many people are endangered.
    [分析]此句用and把三个分句一贯到底,显得乏味。如果把句子合并成复合句,语义就会更加连贯,语言也会更加流畅:
    The Mississippi River, which is one of the longest rivers in the world, often overflows its banks in springtime, endangering the lives of many people.


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